Sky Blue Satin
Sky Blue Satin
Would you mind commenting my poem?
Lightweight clouds
of golden satin streak
across the dense blue sky,
swirling in a assortment
of gold and blue.
Then, a light plum
veil conceals the canvas
of day completely, as
the elderly moon and
the diamonds encrusting
the veil sparkles against
it in tranquillity.
Oh, how I wish
the veil of night
could conceal the
harmful flaws of this
society that threatens lives,
like inner maelstrom.
Unfourtunately,
it only conceals the
day's sky.
What is your interpretation? Does the meaning seem too vauge, and do you have any critique to offer?
can definetlt see that you have talent, but this poem isnt really my thing. i prefer less suttle points and hidden meanings and metaphors in poetry,
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